Thursday, May 14, 2020
Causes and Symptoms of Eyestrain
Eyestrain is fundamentally caused by straining one or more of the eye muscles. Most commonly the strain is in the ciliary body, the eye muscle responsible for accommodation, typically by keeping it in one position for a long time, visually concentrating on one thing or one distance for too long. The eyes tend to strain faster from focusing on near distances as opposed to far distances. Switching between distances rapidly can hasten the strain as well. Symptoms of Eyestrain The Mayo Clinic lists the following possible symptoms of eyestrain:à Sore, tired, burning, or itching eyesWatery or dry eyesBlurred or double visionHeadacheSore neck, shoulders, or backIncreased sensitivity to lightDifficulty concentratingFeeling that you cannot keep your eyes open Common Causes Some common activities that can cause eyestrain include using a computer or other electronic device, reading, watching television, and driving. In addition to activities that cause you to focus the eyes for long periods, some environmental factors can add to the stress placed on your eyes, such as low light levels,à fluorescent lighting, a bad viewing angle, a poor ergonomic computer setup, low screen contrast levels,à glare, brightness, and dry moving air from a fan or air conditioner. Some personal factors contribute to eyestrain as well, such as poor and uncorrected vision, stress, fatigue/tiredness, and poor posture. What You Can Do Of course, as a problem caused by overuse, youll want to incorporate breaks into your work or activity thats causing the eyestrain or limit yourà screen time if possible. Improve the lighting in the room, such as using soft light or task light thats not glaring into your eyes or onto a TV or computer screen. Using eye drops can help relieve dryness, as well as using a humidifier and positioning yourself or the air vent to limit air blowing directly on you. At Your Computer Station If work at a computer is a problem, position the monitor so that the top of the screen is at or below your eye level, at an arms length away from you. Staring can be a problem, drying out your eyes, and people dont even realize it. Make sure youre blinking enough. Every 20 minutes or so, look away from the screen and focus on something in the distance. You can cut sunlight glare on the screen with a device that goes over the screen, or cut glare from lighting in the room by closing blinds or shades and using a desk lamp to the side rather than fluorescent lights above and behind you. You also can blow up text on the screen for easier reading, and adjust the monitors settings to cut brightness. Keep the screen clean, as dust cuts contrast, and dont put a monitor right in front of a white wall. Glasses If you need glasses and have to work on a screen daily, your eye doctor may recommend eye exercises and corrective lenses (contacts or glasses) that have a special coating to reduce glare from screens. If you drive a lot, sunglasses with UV protection can help reduce strain as well.
Wednesday, May 6, 2020
Obeservational and Sampling in Traditional and Cultural...
Sir Davi Mbelu University of Phoenix Introduction In this paper attempt shall be made to compare multicultural and traditional psychology research methods with a view to examining observation and sampling as the variables of interest. However, these variables of interest shall be assessed in respect of how they are applied in cultural and traditional psychological research. In addition, the fundamental problems that may be encountered by the researchers during the implementation of the observation and sampling in cultural and traditional psychological research setting shall be addressed. The major aim of observational methods as observed byâ⬠¦show more contentâ⬠¦Researchers tend to choose intervention approach to apply in natural setting through three major methods, including participation observation, structured observation, and the field experiment; however, the extent and nature of intervention differs across these three approaches (Shaughnessy, 2003 p. 91). Participant observation is employed into major ways, which includes disguised, or undisguised. Once too often, researchers use undisguised participant observation for effective understanding or knowledge regarding the culture and behavior of group of people which most often applied by anthropologist (Levin, 1963). Moreso, the understanding that people do not behave normally as they should, if they are aware that their behavior is being observed, disguised participant observation is appropriately used. Much as participant observation be it either disguised or undisguised may allow an observer access to situations not ordinarily open to both traditional and multicultural research. It behooves an observer in employing these approaches to be mindful of possible loss of objectivity and unforeseen impacts the behavior under study may have on a participant observer. Structured observation is oftentimes employed to deal with the problem associated with using naturalistic observation
Tuesday, May 5, 2020
Topic Engagement and Participation
Question: Discuss about theTopic Engagement and Participation. Answer: Introduction: The blog enteries has been written on topic managing for quality and performance excellence. The case study mentioned in book applying process improvement tools to an order fulfillment process has been used to make suitable references in discussion and comments section. The blog entries are self generated, however they are linked to the process improvement tools and managing quality. The comments and discussion section of the report identifies some points about the topic and it is linked with key issues discussed in case study of applying process improvement tools to an order fulfillment process. The comments and discussion has been made on the basis of Aim privacy policy. The comments have been discussed with consideration of topic. 4 self generated blog entries and 4 comments and discussion section for each has been done in the assignment. The references have been shown at the end of the document. Blog Enteries Quality Management and Customer Satisfaction According to the Snee Hoerl (2003), customer satisfaction is not associated with objective statistics but it is more an attitude or feeling. Customer satisfaction increases the buy more frequently and buy more options where a successful purchase improves the cash flow only. The major goal of quality management team in an organisation is customer satisfaction. Customer satisfaction is one of the major goal of an organisation because if there customers are not satified the organisation will not able to survive in the market. Customer satifaction comes in various forms, the one is asssociated with quality of product and its usability over the process and other one is associated with delievery of services. In case of product order fulfillment also comes with services in few cases such as in case of automotive car parts distribution, services would be considered the most important aspect of customer satisfaction. If a distrubution center is not able to delever the automotive parts on tim e then it would directly impact the quality of service of organisation. Comments And Discussion It is true that customer satisfaction is not always associated with product quality sometime it is associated with quality of services comes along with product. As per the case study of applying process improvement tools to an order fulfilement process, the branded automatice parts were deleivered by the distributor whose quality is signified to the consumers but how it is served to the customers makes the difference. But the question is only customer satisfaction is the goal of quality management? According to Brennan (2011), Only customer satisfaction is not the only goal of qaulity management, instead it is associated with company goals as well such as reduced operating cost Best Process Improvement Tools for order Fulfillment Process An order fulfillment process is the key to provide quality services to its customers. The quality of services in an organisation depends on this process only, if the process is not effective and efficient then it will effect quality further customer satisfaction and organisations cash flow as well. There are several tools that can be used to improve order fulfillment process such as Pareto chart, DMAIC model, Cause and effect diagram etc. A pareto chart is a vertical bar graph that helps to determine the problems need attention as the taller bar shows the variables that have maximum impact over the process. Pareto chart is based on Pareto principal who maintains 80% of the output and 20% of input. Pareto is also known as basic tool for controlling quality (Jeston and Nelis, 2006). The DMAIC model is most common six sigma approach in improving order fulfillment process, the model has 5 phases: define measure, analyze, improve and control. The cause and effect diagram is a tool that is used to analyze what are the cause and effects of a problem on order fulfillment process. The best six sigma approaches DMAIC because it is a complete framework to improve the order fulfillment process rather than just being an analysis tool. Comments and Discussion In addition to process improvement tools creative problem solving is also eseential to improvise order fulfillment process. The process improvement tools that has been disucssed in above posts are the basic tools. The cause and effects tool is the best tool to identify the creative solution. A text book solution is a non-creative solution. The case study of Applying process improvement tools to an order fulfillment process shows how automative parts distributor applied creative problem solving in study of demining cycle by going through a brainstorming session with internal stakeholders (Evans et al., 2008). Define-Measure-Analyse-Improve- Control (DMAIC Model) and Demining Cycle to Improve Order Fulfilment Process DMAIC model is based on 5 improvement steps: define, measure, analyze, improve and control. The define is the initial step where leader needs to define the current situation as well objectives of the improvement. After define stage the next step is measure where activities are measured on the basis of time and cost. Each and every activity in the order process is measured for time. Once each and every activity is measured on the basis of the time and cost the next step is improvisation. At improve stage the activities taking maximum time and cost are planned to be improved. At this stage the solution of the problem is identified. The final step of the model is control where activities changes for improvisation are controlled on the basis of set objectives (Wisner and Stanley, 2008). Demining cycle includes four stages: plan, study, do and Act. At stage of plan the situation is critically analyzed, after that relevant study to sort out the problem is conducted in order to find the best solution for the situation. The act is the last stage where planned solution is implemented (Adam, 2003). According to the case study published in Managing for quality and performance excellence the problem that was identified in order fulfillment process of the organization was associated with picking time that was because of small carts. The problem was identified at first stage and brainstorming was used to study and determine solution which was then implemented by the team. The case study shows that team has worked on DMAIC model. Comment and Discussion A best implementation of DMAIC model has been seen in book Managing for quality and performance excellence The manger identified why deliveries get delayed and which activity takes the maximum time and the measured average time of these activities and utilized creative problem solving to determine solution that was long cart to reduce picking time. How Activity Delays Affects the Order Fulfillment Process and its Quality In an order fulfillment process time and cost required by the activities plays an essential role as it defines the effectiveness and efficiency of the process. The improvement in process is always associated with activity time and cost. Activity delays in order fulfillment process affect the customer satisfaction which is one of the major concerns of an organization. There are so many impacts of delayed activity on organization such as additional operational cost, quality improvement analysis cost as the company need to carry out DMAIC activities which increases the cost (Evans et al., 2008). The internal and external customers of the organization are also impacted with such activity delays (Cumberlidge, 2007). The internal customer of the organization is employees who are running the operations and these delays can affect their working and performance as well. On other side external customers satisfaction is badly impacted by such delays as happened in case of applying process improvement tools to an order fulfillment process mentioned in Managing for quality and performance excellence. Comment and Discussion The activities as cause of delay can be anyone but the impact of activity would be same on organization. The difference will be improving and controlling stage of the DMAIC model. The solution will be different if packaging time is the core reason of delay instead of picking time. And its true that its impact on organization will be increase cost, lost customers and loss in profit. References Snee, R. Hoerl, R. (2003). Leading Six Sigma. Upper Saddle River, NJ: Financial Times Prentice Hall. Brennan, L. (2011). Operations management. New York: McGraw-Hill. Jeston, J. Nelis, J. (2006). Business process management. Burlington, MA: Butterworth-Heinemann. Wisner, J. Stanley, L. (2008). Process management. Mason, OH: Thomson South-Western. Snack, N. et al. (2006).Operations and Process Management: Principles and practice for Kanji, G. Wallace, W. (2000). Business excellence through customer satisfaction. Total Quality Management, 11(7), 979-998. https://dx.doi.org/10.1080/09544120050135515 Evans, J., Lindsay, W., Evans, J. (2008). Managing for quality and performance excellence. Mason, OH: Thomson/South-Western. Adams, W.C. et al. (2003).Six Sigma Deployments.Boston: Butterworth-Heinemann. Cumberlidge, M. (2007). Business process management with JBoss jBPM. Birmingham, U.K.: Packt Publ.
Saturday, April 11, 2020
Family - Meet The Simpsons Essays - Marge Simpson, The Simpsons
Family - Meet The Simpsons Meet the Simpsons Over time, the definition of what exactly family means has changed with time. Usually, what constitutes making up a family is relative to a specific culture, but as always, there are exceptions to the rule. Ever since the golden age of television had sprung upon American culture, television has tried to mimic the ideal American family through it's programming. Even as early as the 1950's, television producers made programming that would represent what exactly the ideal American family was. Take for example the show Leave It to Beaver. While I am not going to go in detail about each character, I am going to summarize the family structure and the role of the member. There was a father figure, his job, or responsibility rather, was to financially support the family, while being an exemplary father to his children. The mother on the other hand, was solely responsible for being a typical housewife, while not neglecting the rearing of her children. The children did not have any real responsibility, but they respected their parents and attempted to stay out of trouble. Television shows for the most part in this early era of programming followed among these lines. There has always been at least one show each decade that followed the evolution of American life. In the 1960's, there was the Andy Griffith Show. In the 1970's, there was a different spin on family life with the show All in the Family, which did not have the typical white collar father, and its emphasis was not on raising the children, rather it was after the children had grown up. While in the 1980's there was a split in the television programming representation of American families. There were still shows that represented the ideal American family, such as Different Strokes and Family Ties as well as The Cosby Show, but there was also a more realistic representation of American life in Married With Children. However, it is not in a drama that American family life is best represented in the 1990's. Instead, it is in the animated series, The Simpsons. The Simpsons follows suit with the other dramas that reflected the decade in which they aired. According to the U.S. consensus for March 1998, the majority of households in America are married couples (U.S. Consensus pp. 1, 3,4,6). The Simpson's meet this. Also according to the consensus, the average married couple has approximately 2.6 children per household (U.S. Consensus, Household Characteristics p.1). Since there cannot be six-tenths of a child, I will round up to three children, in which the Simpson family has: Bart, Lisa and Maggie. Also, the average American is a blue-collar worker. The father figure, Homer, meets this factor with his job at the nuclear power plant within his hometown of Springfield. So according to the statistics, the Simpson family could be considered an average American family. In the next part of the essay, I will look at each individual character of the Simpson family, and try to relate how that individual could be considered a typical American. I attempt to avoid using stereotypes, but nothing is full proof. I will look at some of the character's traits and try to relate how that is a parody of an American. First, I will begin with discussing the character of Homer Simpson. As you might know, Homer is the father figure of the household, whose responsibilities include financially supporting the household, since he is the household's primary source of income. He has his flaws like any person would, but somehow he and his family tend to work it out. Some of his mishaps are very similar to those that most of us have had to face. For example, he leaves the keys in his door to the house quite often (Hall, The Homer File p. 2). Another example, would be the time when he attempted to un-jam a toaster by shoving a knife in and out of it (Hall, The Homer File p.2). Homer also expresses concerns over his obesity as well as being a bad father (Hall, The Homer File p. 3). He also has a problem with his cursing, as well as his consumption of alcohol (Hall,
Tuesday, March 10, 2020
3 Tips for Writing Stellar Georgia Tech Essays
3 Tips for Writing Stellar Georgia Tech Essays SAT / ACT Prep Online Guides and Tips Before you envision yourself getting settled in at Georgia Tech, you must get through the hurdle of writing the Georgia Tech essays. The Georgia Tech supplement requires you to write two short essays.So what are the possible essay prompts? And how should you answer them? Keep reading to learn exactly what the Georgia Tech essays are, what kinds of topics you can write about (and what kinds of topics to avoid), and how to ensure youââ¬â¢re submitting a quality essay. Feature Image: Wally Gobetz/Flickr What Essays Does Georgia Tech Require? The Georgia Tech application includesa total of three essays. One of these is a personal essay that answers a prompt from either the Common Appor the Coalition App(depending on which system you apply through). This essay should be around 500-550 words, and must not be longer than 650 words. You can visit the Common App and Coalition App websites to see the essay prompts for the 2018-19 application cycle. The other two essays are part of the Georgia Tech supplement and are referred to as the Georgia Tech short answer questions, since your responses to these are shorter than the personal essay you must write for the Common App/Coalition App. Like the longer personal essay, these two shorter essays are required components of the Georgia Tech application. The prompts for these essays are given on both the Common App and Coalition App, and each short answer must be 250 words or less (about half the length of a regular college essay). This is just a general overview of the Georgia Tech essays. But in order for you to write them, you need to know what the current Georgia Tech essay prompts are. We'll take a look at the prompts next! What Are the Georgia Tech Supplement Essay Prompts? As you now know, in addition to writing a long Common App or Coalition App personal essay, you must answer two questions as part of the Georgia Tech supplement. Below are the possible essay prompts youââ¬â¢ll have for these questions. Georgia Tech Essay 1: Why Georgia Tech? For the first Georgia Tech supplement essay, there is just one prompt, which asks you to discuss why youââ¬â¢ve chosen to apply to Georgia Tech. This prompt is essentially a version of the "why this college" prompt, which we discuss more in our in-depth guide on how to write a "why this college" essay. You may write up to 250 words for your response. Here is the prompt: Why do you want to study your chosen major at Georgia Tech, and how do you think Georgia Tech will prepare you to pursue opportunities in that field after graduation? Georgia Tech Essay 2: Mini Personal Essay For the second Georgia Tech essay, youââ¬â¢ll havethree possible prompts from which to choose. Each question is fairly different from one another, giving you a broad choice in terms of how you can approach this essay. It'sbest to think of this essay as a mini personal essay since youââ¬â¢ll be writing about a certain aspect of yourself (depending on the prompt you choose).Once again, your response must be 250 words or less. Here are the prompts: Please choose ONE of the following questions and provide an answer in 250 words or less. Techââ¬â¢s motto is Progress and Service. We find that students who ultimately have a broad impact first had a significant one at home. What is your role in your immediate or extended family? And how have you seen evidence of your impact on them? Georgia Tech is always looking for innovative undergraduates. Have you had any experience as an entrepreneur? What would you like Georgia Tech to provide to further your entrepreneurial interests? In our application review, we want to get to know you better. One way to do that is to understand a typical day for you. Please describe your typical day. Now that weââ¬â¢ve covered the basics of the Georgia Tech essay prompts, letââ¬â¢s take a look at how you should answer these prompts to give yourself the best shot at getting into this prestigious college. In this next section, we'llgo through both supplemental essays and their prompts, giving you tips on how to choose the best prompt for you so you can write a memorable essay. For this first essay, you must answer the critical question: why Georgia Tech? How to Write Georgia Tech Essay 1 (Why Georgia Tech?) As a reminder, the first Georgia Tech essay prompt asks you to explain, in 250 words or less, why you want to attend the school: Why do you want to study your chosen major at Georgia Tech, and how do you think Georgia Tech will prepare you to pursue opportunities in that field after graduation? In your response, you should discuss why you decided to apply to Georgia Tech and how the major youââ¬â¢ve chosen will help you achieve your academic or professional goals. This prompt is a version of the "why this college" prompt. Specifically, this prompt is a "why us" prompt, as itââ¬â¢s asking you to elaborate on why this college and the major youââ¬â¢ve chosen are best suited to you and your aspirations. In other words, what about Georgia Tech and the field of study you want to pursue there will help you achieve your future goals? To answer this question, youââ¬â¢ll need to do some research on Georgia Tech and the academic program youââ¬â¢re applying for. The easiest way to do this is to go to the Georgia Tech website to get an overview of what's offered by your program, including the kinds of classes, study abroad options, professors, and internship opportunities. If possible, I suggest visiting the campus to sit in on classes and meet professors so you can get a clearer feel for the academic program as well as the environment at Georgia Tech as a whole. In your essay, try to pick a specific characteristic to focus on- donââ¬â¢t just say you want to attend Georgia Tech because itââ¬â¢s prestigious or well known. Lots of colleges are! Next, youââ¬â¢ll need to know how your education at Georgia Tech will help you after college. For example, you could write about how you think Georgia Techââ¬â¢s cooperative education program will help you gain relevant professional experience and make connections with like-minded peers. Regardless of what aspects of Georgia Tech and your major you want to write about, make sure to clearly connect the essay back to you and your own interests and goals. Here are some possible topics you could use for your "Why Georgia Tech?" essay: An anecdote relating some sort of positive personal experience you had at Georgia Tech (such as while on a campus tour) A positive interaction you had with someone affiliated with Georgia Tech, such as a current student or professor involved with the major youââ¬â¢re applying for Your excitement about getting to work witha particular faculty member, and how this opportunity will help you further your career goals Your enthusiasm for getting to study in a program or major/minor that's not usually offered at many schools or that has a unique, interesting angle at Georgia Tech A special facility or piece of equipment you're looking forward to being able to work in or with, and that isnââ¬â¢t offered on other campuses or is very rare How to Write Georgia Tech Essay 2 (Mini Personal Essay) For your second Georgia Tech essay, youââ¬â¢ll get to choose from three possible options and write a response in 250 words or less on some aspect of yourself. Below, we go over each essay prompt, giving you tips on whether to choose a prompt and what to write about so you can come up with an effective response- one that willideally wow the admissions committee! What kind of impact do you have on your family/gaggle? Prompt 1: Your Family Role Techââ¬â¢s motto is Progress and Service. We find that students who ultimately have a broad impact first had a significant one at home. What is your role in your immediate or extended family? And how have you seen evidence of your impact on them? This essay prompt is focused on how you impact your own family and what kind of (positive) role you play in your family unit. Georgia Tech asks this question to get a feel for how you act in personal situations and what these experiences might suggest about your possible future impact on other Georgia Tech students and on society as a whole. Here are some possible roles you could discuss in your essay (since you wonââ¬â¢t have a lot of space for your response, itââ¬â¢s best to choose the role you think best defines you and in the most positive light): Mediator of conflicts or fights Encourager of trying new things or getting someone out of their comfort zone Supporter of others in difficult situations or times of need Decision maker (i.e., someone who often makes major decisions for their family or helps others in their family make important decisions) Protector/caretaker of younger siblings, cousins, or other family members Planner of activities or events, such as vacations, chore schedules, meals, etc. Should You Choose This Prompt? You donââ¬â¢t have to come from a particularly interesting, crazy, or unique family to be able to choose this prompt and write a great essay. The point of this essay is to explain what kind of impact youââ¬â¢ve had on your family or a family member, and to relate this to your future role and impact at Georgia Tech and beyond. If you can quickly identify how you interact with your family and what kind of effect youââ¬â¢ve had on them, this is a good prompt to choose.If, however, youââ¬â¢re not sure whether this prompt is a good fit for you, try asking yourself the following questions: Is there a certain noun or adjective your family members would use to describe you and your role in the family? Do you have any younger siblings or cousins whom youââ¬â¢ve had to lead, give advice to, or offer support to in some critical way? Was there a time you had a positive impact on or made a positive contribution to your family? What happened, and what might this imply about what kind of role youââ¬â¢ll have as a student at Georgia Tech? Tips for Answering This Prompt Focus on a specific anecdote to make your essay more realistic and relatable. Donââ¬â¢t just say youââ¬â¢re a mediator because you always have to break up fights between your two younger siblings. Give us the details, the nitty-gritty: who said what and to whom? How did you react? What kind of (positive) outcome did your involvement have in the end? Write about something that's significant to you.You donââ¬â¢t have to write about something super rare or out of the ordinary, but it should still be important and memorable to you. For instance, you could write about the time you cheered up your sister after she tripped during a track meet, making her miss the chance to come in first. This indicates that youââ¬â¢re not only caring but are also supportive and willing to be there for people in times of need. Prompt 2: The Innovative Entrepreneur Georgia Tech is always looking for innovative undergraduates. Have you had any experience as an entrepreneur? What would you like Georgia Tech to provide to further your entrepreneurial interests? This essay prompt is a lot more professionally-oriented than the first one, which mainly focuses on your personality and interpersonal relationships. With this prompt, youââ¬â¢re expected to talk about a specific experience youââ¬â¢ve had as an entrepreneur. This could be a highly professional experience, such as that time you worked part-time with a startup to build and sell an invention that prevents wildfires. Or it could be something that you did entirely on your own, such as going door-to-door to sell soaps and lotions you made. Should You Choose This Prompt? This prompt specifically targets applicants with entrepreneurial backgrounds. If you donââ¬â¢t have entrepreneurial experience or arenââ¬â¢t interested in entrepreneurship, it's best to choose a different prompt. Tips for Answering This Prompt Focus on just one entrepreneurial experience. Donââ¬â¢t cram in a list of all your professional endeavors- this isnââ¬â¢t what Georgia Tech wants! Instead, talk about only the most significant experience youââ¬â¢ve had in the field. This could be your first venture into entrepreneurship or your most recent. Then, concentrate on what made the experience so meaningful to you. Be specific about how Georgia Tech can help you accomplish your goals. Donââ¬â¢t just say that the rigorous academic environment will encourage you to work hard. What specifically does Georgia Tech have that can help you explore your professional interests? For example, you could mention itsGlobal Social Venture Competition orIdeas to Serve Competitionand how you plan to participate in these events to boost your entrepreneurial skill set. Prompt 3: Your Typical Day In our application review, we want to get to know you better. One way to do that is to understand a typical day for you. Please describe your typical day. This final essay prompt is arguably the most fun and creative of the three since itââ¬â¢s all about your day-to-day life. By seeing what your usual routine looks like, Georgia Tech can learn more about what kind of person you are and how your personality and interests might mesh with those of other students on campus. Should You Choose This Prompt? I recommend picking this prompt if you are a fan of its more laid-back, creative nature and are enthusiastic about being able to delve deep into the ostensibly mundane details of your life. This is also a good prompt to choose if you arenââ¬â¢t sure whether the other prompts are well suited for you or if you really canââ¬â¢t think of anything interesting or unique to write for them (the big plus with this essay prompt is that the main topic of your essay is essentially given to you!). Tips for Answering This Prompt Write about the most interesting, unique, or important parts of your daily routine.You donââ¬â¢t need to have some crazy or super weird routine, but since you don't have a lot of space to write, you'll want to focus on the most interesting and significant moments from your day. For instance, say you take harp lessons every day after school; this would be a unique detail to mention. Or maybe you volunteer at an animal shelter a few days a week. Even if you feel your days are boring, you can always shake up your essay by inserting some fun and quirky description (see the next tip for more details on how to do this). Avoid overly general descriptions- add color with specificity.You can liven up your essay by being specific and injecting your voice into what you write. Instead of writing, "I wake up at 7 a.m. and eat a bowl of cereal before heading to school," itââ¬â¢d be far more interesting to write, "My alarm goes off at 7 a.m., but I donââ¬â¢t get up until 7:32. After launching into a familiar panic and rummaging through my dresser to find that one pair of holeless socks I own, I race downstairs to scarf down a small bowl of Apple Jacks before rushing outside and hopping on the rusty bicycle Iââ¬â¢ve owned since I was 12." Reflect on what you do- donââ¬â¢t just list your activities. The topic of this essay runs the risk of becoming a laundry list of what you do each day. Remember that the point of this prompt isnââ¬â¢t to list your actions but to present a running commentary on why you do the things you do and how these have influenced your personality, point of view, interests, and/or goals. Donââ¬â¢t be afraid to shake up the organization of your essay. Most applicants write about their daily activities in chronological order. While thereââ¬â¢s nothing wrong with this approach, you can illuminate your more creative side by writing about your routine in a more unique way, such as by grouping similar activities together or by ranking your level of satisfaction at each point throughout the day. No matter what style of organization you choose, just make sure that your essay is comprehensible and doesnââ¬â¢t come off too pretentious-sounding. Want to build the best possible college application? We can help. PrepScholar Admissions is the world's best admissions consulting service. We combine world-class admissions counselors with our data-driven, proprietary admissions strategies. We've overseen thousands of students get into their top choice schools, from state colleges to the Ivy League. We know what kinds of students colleges want to admit. We want to get you admitted to your dream schools. Learn more about PrepScholar Admissions to maximize your chance of getting in. Georgia Tech Essay Examples + Analysis We've writtentwo Georgia Tech essay examples (one for each short answer question) to help give you an idea as to what and how you could write your Georgia Tech essays. Additionally, we go over what makes them good essays for a Georgia Tech application. Georgia Tech Essay Example 1 (Why Georgia Tech?) "Honestly, I canââ¬â¢t imagine what my life would be like if I hadnââ¬â¢t gone to Georgia Tech." Katrina was a few years older than me and the sister of my best friend, Troy, whoââ¬â¢d given me her email address so I could ask any questions I had about her time at Georgia Tech. This was the last line of her response- and by far the most memorable. Like Katrina, I canââ¬â¢t imagine myself not attending Georgia Tech. As an aspiring environmental engineer, I see Georgia Tech as a gateway to not just learning but also professional success. The flexibility of the major would allow me to focus specifically on my passion for reducing the negative effects of climate change and securing access to clean water. As a senior, I plan to take several hydraulics-focused electives. In addition, through the InVenture Prize, which I hope to participate in at least twice, Iââ¬â¢ll be able to utilize the knowledge Iââ¬â¢ve gained through my classes, projects, and fieldwork by translating it into a concrete vision- specifically, an invention that will increase the availability of fresh, healthy water for disadvantaged communities. After graduation, and as a proud Georgia Tech alumnus (ideally with an InVenture Prize), I plan to implement the skills Iââ¬â¢ve gained through my environmental engineering major in the nonprofit sector. I havenââ¬â¢t met Katrina yet, but I feel as though I know her- perhaps itââ¬â¢s that shared sense of joy at having discovered the perfect school for the paths weââ¬â¢ve chosen. Hereââ¬â¢s why this Georgia Tech essay works: Itââ¬â¢s got a creative hook that draws you in. This Georgia Tech essay opens with a quotation that immediately makes it feel as though youââ¬â¢re reading a compelling story. It then goes on to connect this hook directly to the narrator who "canââ¬â¢t imagine â⬠¦ not attending Georgia Tech," ensuring the focus remains on the applicant and not Katrina. It mentions specific features of Georgia Tech. The applicant doesnââ¬â¢t just write about how prestigious Georgia Tech is but specifically mentions opportunities sheââ¬â¢s interested in taking advantage of, such as hydraulics courses and the famous InVenture Prize competition. The mark of a good college essay = an acceptance letter! Georgia Tech Essay Example 2 (Mini Personal Essay) For this essay example, the applicant is responding to the third prompt, which asks you to describe your typical day. I like to think Iââ¬â¢ve gotten used to that sense of dread before English class, but not quite yet. Itââ¬â¢s my first class of the day, and Iââ¬â¢m feeling a little too tired to be able to make sense of Pride and Prejudice. But I try anyway because I really love the book. It sits on my shelf, creased and torn from years of curling up in bed with it. At lunchtime, I pull out my copy of Freakonomics. My aunt lent it to me weeks ago after I told her I was interested in reading more nonfiction. And I canââ¬â¢t seem to put it down- even as my tuna sandwich begs me to eat it before the bell rings. School ends at 2:30, and a few minutes later I hop on the bus, takeFreakonomicsout of my backpack, and immediately flip to the bent corner of page 68, where I'd left off at lunch. At 4, I leave home to go to my part-time job at the local library. There, my manager, Shelley, greets me with her toothy grin and sing-songy voice: "Hey, Reggie, how was school?" I smile and chat a bit before heading straight for the bookshelves, as if I'm being pulled forward by an invisible thread. While working, I can't help but devour the title of each book I put away. Maybe one of these days I'll leave work without checking out a new book to read- but I can't see this happening anytime soon. Hereââ¬â¢s why this Georgia Tech essay works: It has a focused, interesting narrative. This applicant isnââ¬â¢t just describing banal day-to-day activities but is concentrating on how his daily routine ultimately connects back to his love of reading. This approach makes the essay far more unique and memorable. It uses specific, creative imagery. With this prompt, telling a captivating story is vital. After all, most peopleââ¬â¢s "typical days" arenââ¬â¢t that exciting. This applicant, however, uses interesting imagery, from his managerââ¬â¢s "toothy grin" to the tuna sandwich that "begs" him to eat it. All of this drives home the fact that the applicant is not merely an avid reader but is also a very creative thinker and writer. How to Write a Great Georgia Tech Essay: 3 Essential Tips Now that you know the specifics of each Georgia Tech essay prompt, here are three key tips to use while writing your essay, no matter which prompt you choose. #1: Be Specific and Concise The Georgia Tech supplemental essays only give you room for up to 250 words, which is about half the length of a typical personal statement. Since youââ¬â¢re so tight on length, youââ¬â¢ll need to make sure youââ¬â¢re using the space you have wisely. Don'twrite super flowery, verbose descriptions or rely on overly vague examples. Instead, be as specific as you can be so that youââ¬â¢re emphasizing only the most important parts of the story you want to tell. Specificity will make your essay more concise and easier to follow. #2: Show, Donââ¬â¢t Tell Youââ¬â¢ve probably heard this refrain a million times, but itââ¬â¢s especially important for college essays: show your experiences, emotions, and perspectives instead of simply telling them to your readers.Doing this will make your Georgia Tech essays sound vibrant and alive rather than dull and boring. One of the very best ways to catapult your descriptions to a whole new level and to lend a stronger voice to your writing is to use a variety ofliterary devices, including flashbacks/anecdotes, imagery, and euphemisms. #3: Polish and Proofread Before you submit your Georgia Tech essays, make sure to take some time to read them over, edit them, get feedback, and proofread them. The best way to do this is to start by writing a rough draft. Once finished, put your essay away for a little while- anywhere from a couple of days to a week or so depending on the amount of time you have left before college applications are due- and then take it out again. As you read your essay, mark any areas that are unclear, awkwardly worded, or irrelevant. You should also proofread your essay for any glaring typos and errors in punctuation, spelling, and grammar. Once youââ¬â¢ve repeated this process a few times, itââ¬â¢s time to get a new set of eyes to look it over for you. Ask someone you trust, such as a teacher, parent, or counselor, to read your essay and offer comments and corrections on it. Doing all of this will ensure that your essay is completely polished by the time you turn it in to Georgia Tech! Whatââ¬â¢s Next? If you're reading this, you're likely not only applying to Georgia Tech.Get more tips with our expert guides to the Stanford essays, the Northwestern essay, and the Harvard essay. Applying through the Common App? Check out this comprehensive list of schools that accept the Common App, and learn more about how to write the Common App essay. To learn more about Georgia Tech and how to get in, take a look at its admission requirements page. Want to write the perfect college application essay? Get professional help from PrepScholar. Your dedicated PrepScholar Admissions counselor will craft your perfect college essay, from the ground up. We'll learn your background and interests, brainstorm essay topics, and walk you through the essay drafting process, step-by-step. At the end, you'll have a unique essay that you'll proudly submit to your top choice colleges. Don't leave your college application to chance. Find out more about PrepScholar Admissions now:
Saturday, February 22, 2020
Evaluation essay of movie home alone Example | Topics and Well Written Essays - 750 words
Evaluation of movie home alone - Essay Example The Christmas mood begins with background music that reflects Christmas songs. Viewers therefore get a belief that that is where most focus of the movie will lie. However, a great suspense develops early in the movie when Kevinââ¬â¢s parents leave for Paris without him. More characters appear in the film when the parents of Kevin leave for Paris. Close ups are used to introduce the characters while mid shots are employed during conversations. A selection of natural dress code shows a normal family image, for instance the appearance of the mother of Kevin in a long dress shows that she is an elderly mother. The suburb Chicago shows that Kevin is from a rich family and the lighting further emphasizes the festive season. The acting was well done. The main actors are Macaulay Culkin, who plays the role of eight-year boy called Kevin and two burglars, Daniel Stern and Joe Pesci. In addition, the actors mind their language. This has made the suitable for all family viewing. The movie commences with Kevinââ¬â¢s family giving an impression of them as the main characters with Kevin as the protagonist because he is an only child. Even so, the story develops quickly with Kevin as the main character and more characters appear. Culkin had many scenes to play, which he did well. His high level of confidence and self-esteem is also a contributing factor to success of the story. The woman playing the role of Kevinââ¬â¢s mother uses little makeup. For that reason, she appears more mature with a motherly figure. This is further emphasized by her dressing code. The story line of the movie is just amazing. There is a striking balance between religion, family life and just some stupid ideas that bring out the comic feel of the movie. The family life is clear at the beginning of the movie when Kevin and the parents chat happily. Towards the end of the movie, there is an expression of socialization. This happens when
Thursday, February 6, 2020
Altria's Commitment to the Environment Essay Example | Topics and Well Written Essays - 750 words
Altria's Commitment to the Environment - Essay Example It wants to switch consumers' attention from the company for being solely a tobacco and alcohol company and show that it has serious environmental concerns so it pursues actions friendly to human beings. It would have been useless if these concerns were only part of a public relations plan and were not implemented in reality. People, nowadays, have become more environmentally conscious so it is in the best interest of a company to show that it respects the environment and it does not challenge the various environmental groups. Altria has to show that it wants to protect people's health and the best way to show it is by respecting the environment. No, the commitment will not offset the environmental issues with the tobacco company, at least not in the short - run. Each decision of the company made public will have an impact on its various stakeholders. So, a public relations campaign as this one will not bring the desired results if the rest of company decisions and strategy show the opposite. Even if the company decisions are in accordance with the environmental issues, still a negative perception of the image requires a lot of time in order to be changed into a positive one. Altria needs to be sincere with its customers and although it implements its environmental actions it needs to adapt its strategy as a company and become really concerned for consumer's health so this requires a strategic change from the tobacco business and diversify its product portfolio accordingly. Reference List Harrison, J.S., Hitt, M.A. & Ireland, D. (2001). Mergers and acquisitions: A guide to creating value for Stakeholders, Oxford University Press. Kimmel, A.J.(2004). Rumours and Rumour Control: A Manager's Guide to Understanding and Combating Rumours. Lawrence Erlbaum Associates. McCall, J.B. & Stone, M.A.(2004). International Strategic Marketing: A European Perspective.
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